Okay, so here is the inlet shroud, made from the carcass of an old smoker:
I didn't want to mess with the wire frame, so the stainless box didn't fit. With the top on, air comes in mainly right at the front edge of the fuel port. The smoker cover is less than ideal—too much dead air—but of course it fits. Good enough for now.
The burn went pretty much as I have come to expect. With only paper and small pieces to start, the fire turned easily. it was smoky until the barrel top got to around 250˚ and the fire was well established with some larger pieces of fir. It plateaued at 560˚. The cover eliminated smokeback. When it ran back down to about 425˚, I pushed down what was ready to push down and added two ash sticks and a piece of bamboo, all approximately 1" diameter. The barrel top temp climbed to 750˚. The wood wasn't particularly dry, especially the bamboo, and there were a couple of startling steam explosions. Here's a shot from this phase of the burn. The bamboo has already fallen in, you can see a similar piece at the bottom near my toe. Edit: one of the sticks is actually hawthorn. Not that it matters.
The sticks never smoked, but I put the cover on anyway, some of the time. Water was boiling out of the ends. I did notice some smoke beginning to escape at one point, but this turned out to be loose paint/smoke condensate attached to the smoker that was smoldering. A lot of heat comes back up the fuel port when the barrel top is 700˚+.
Overall, I think the shroud may be a good idea, but there are some details to work out about keeping the amount of trapped smoke and heat down.